so I like your game so far but I may understand why some people have put a 1 star review on it.
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Im sorry but your game is all over the place it take at least until the end of the playable content (of this date so march 2023) to understand why MC have power and even at the end there is somethings I dont understand like; what's with the "flashbacks"(if that's even what is happening) or why most of the game is MC playing a game. I mean dont get me wrong its a good game but it still take time to understand. Hope to see more of this game to see how its going.
Hopefully it got better towards the end- All in all I'm glad I started writing all of the stuff I didn't like at the start to learn a bit about writing and scene making, but I don't know if I'm good enough to write the actual plot yet. Be sure to let me know when the next update drops if the pacing gets better or not as it's supposed to answer most of the stuff you talk about on your post!
I think the scene quality is good enough as is, but I need more feedback on the English dialogue side, so thank you so much for the review!
You've spoken to the right person as I do some translation of visual novels. Well I seem to remember that I've seen some typos here and there but nothing too bad. And for the story I'll make sure to write again on Itch after playing it.
I personally like the game and i really look forward to what will happen
I guess the biggest problem is that somethings seem meaningless and aren't explained in any way makimg them feel random and confusing, but that's only because the game isn't finished
Also some things seem to not fit, as if you tried to go into a certain direction but then decided differently in thw middle of it, i recommended that one day when you have more story and content and more importantly when you settled on the main plot and story that you rewrite some of the stuff
Of course i don't want to tell an artist how to make his art, i just try to give an idea to why people don't like the story
Hi dev, could you tell me what are the planned tag, and if the fetishes/kinks are avoidable (they don't happen according to player choice)skippable (they happen but the player doesn't see the scene)forced by plot, or maybe to avoid X content the player should avoid X Li ?
Short-term planned tags are milf and exhibitionism, I don't have planned any kinks that may split users like the infamous NTR, but if for some reason in the future any are added it will be done through patches, (to make sure only those who want to watch it do so) or very hard to miss decisions, thank you!~
Hey thanks so much for the comment, I uploaded the wrong apk by mistake lol! The file should be lighter and work now, let me know if anything else is wrong~
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so I like your game so far but I may understand why some people have put a 1 star review on it.
SPOILER
Im sorry but your game is all over the place it take at least until the end of the playable content (of this date so march 2023) to understand why MC have power and even at the end there is somethings I dont understand like; what's with the "flashbacks"(if that's even what is happening) or why most of the game is MC playing a game. I mean dont get me wrong its a good game but it still take time to understand. Hope to see more of this game to see how its going.
Hopefully it got better towards the end- All in all I'm glad I started writing all of the stuff I didn't like at the start to learn a bit about writing and scene making, but I don't know if I'm good enough to write the actual plot yet. Be sure to let me know when the next update drops if the pacing gets better or not as it's supposed to answer most of the stuff you talk about on your post!
I think the scene quality is good enough as is, but I need more feedback on the English dialogue side, so thank you so much for the review!
You've spoken to the right person as I do some translation of visual novels. Well I seem to remember that I've seen some typos here and there but nothing too bad. And for the story I'll make sure to write again on Itch after playing it.
I personally like the game and i really look forward to what will happen
I guess the biggest problem is that somethings seem meaningless and aren't explained in any way makimg them feel random and confusing, but that's only because the game isn't finished
Also some things seem to not fit, as if you tried to go into a certain direction but then decided differently in thw middle of it, i recommended that one day when you have more story and content and more importantly when you settled on the main plot and story that you rewrite some of the stuff
Of course i don't want to tell an artist how to make his art, i just try to give an idea to why people don't like the story
有中文吗
感谢您对我的游戏的关注！目前，由于游戏的受众较小，暂时还没有中文支持。但是，如果游戏在未来发展壮大，并且我有机会增加其他语言选项，中文绝对会是其中之一。放心吧，目前在游戏剧本中我还没有写入任何有趣的内容，所以您并没有错过太多（笑）。感谢您的理解和支持！
Umm may i ask? Where is the download link for android?
Here <-- The .apk is the android one!
Although I would wait, next update will be better compressed and have more quality and more overall content
Sneak peek~
Great! Just wondering do you have discord channel? I would love to join it
I don't have a discord yet, if in the future this reaches enough people I'll create one-!
For now I'm interacting with the community through F95Zone ~
SO far, so good. Keep it up !
So is this VN a kinetic novel, or will there be choices?
Sorry if you prefer kinetic ones, I added some choices to the script yesterday so pretty safe to say it won't be one of them
Thanks for the question!~
No, I am glad t is a visual novel with choices since I don't like kinetic VN's.
Is this game has incest, because I don't like it
Future tags?? Harem?? Pregnancy?? Please say no to NTR and Sharing
Harem is definitely one of the -sure to be in- tags, don't have pregnancy in the list for now-
And don't have ntr and sharing planned
But pregnancy planned to be in future?
Hi dev, could you tell me what are the planned tag, and if the fetishes/kinks are avoidable (they don't happen according to player choice)skippable (they happen but the player doesn't see the scene)forced by plot, or maybe to avoid X content the player should avoid X Li ?
Thanks, good luck.
Short-term planned tags are milf and exhibitionism, I don't have planned any kinks that may split users like the infamous NTR, but if for some reason in the future any are added it will be done through patches, (to make sure only those who want to watch it do so) or very hard to miss decisions, thank you!~
I cant install the apk, is there a tutorial to install the app? Thank you 😌
Hey thanks so much for the comment, I uploaded the wrong apk by mistake lol! The file should be lighter and work now, let me know if anything else is wrong~
Ok Thanks 👍
May i know whrre is the download link?